Black Poetry : I've Had Enough(Explicit Reality) To An End

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  1. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TO MY MAN

    THIINK OF THIS AS THE OSCARS
    AND I AM ABOUT TO RECEIVE MY AWARD,


    AND NOW FOR, ENDURING THE MOST BULLSH%T IN THIS RELATIONSHIP

    THE PIECE OF MIND AWARD, GOES OUT TO??

    ME

    THANK YOU, THANK YOU

    TODAY AS I STAND BEFORE YOU, REMEMBERING OUR PRESENT AND OUR PAST
    I WOULD LIKE TO TAKE A MOMENT, TO FIRST THANK GOD,

    BEFORE I TELL YOU, MY POOR EXCUSE OF A MAN , TO OFFICIALLY, KISS MY A%S

    THANK YOU GOD, FOR GIVING ME THE WISDOM TO KNOW, SOME PEOPLE WILL NEVER CHANGE
    THANK YOU GOD, FOR GIVING ME THE COURAGE TO LET GO, BEFORE I GO INSANE
    THANK YOU GOD, FOR PROVIDING ME, STRENGHT TO HOLD MY HEAD UP HIGH
    THANK YOU GOD, FOR BREATHING LIFE INTO ME , AND ASSURING ME I WILL SURVIVE

    AND TO MY MAN I WOULD LIKE TO SAY:

    FORGET YOU
    FOR ALL THE TIMES YOU DECIDED TO CALL ME A BIT%H

    FORGET YOU
    FOR ALL THE LIES, THE WOMEN, AND THE EXCUSES YOU BROUGHT TO OUR RELATIONSHIP

    FORGET YOU
    FOR THINKING THAT YOUR MANHOOD WAS YOUR DEFINITION TO BEING A MAN

    FORGET YOU
    FOR NOT CARING ENOUGH, TO UNDERSTAND, ME , THE MOTHER OF YOUR CHILD, YOUR WIFE, YOUR WOMAN

    FORGET YOU
    FOR TAKING VOWS TO A COMMITMENT, YOU KNEW YOU COULDN’T KEEP

    FORGET YOU
    FOR BEING IGNORANT,SELFISH,MANIPULATIVE AND CHEAP

    FORGET YOU
    FOR ATEMPTING TO BREAK MY SPIRIT, WHILE YOU WALKED ALL OVER MY HEART

    FORGET YOU
    TODAY, TOMORROW, FOREVER OR UNTIL DEATH DO US PART

    FORGET YOU
    UNTIL FUTHER NOTICE, BECAUSE I AM TIRED OF DEALING WITH YOUR SH%T

    MATTER OF FACT

    CONSIDER THIS MY RESIGNATION TO ENDING THIS , RELATIONSHIP, MARRIAGE, ARRANGMENT, WHATEVER YOU WANT TO CALL IT

    LET JUST SAY
    I'VE HAD ENOUGH OF YOU, I QUIT

    NOW THAT I HAVE A PIECE OF MIND, NO MORE CONCERNS OVER YOU,
    I CAN GO ON WITH MY LIFE,
    BECAUSE
    WE ARE OFFICIALLY THROUGH


    © Copyright 2004 by FINDLOVEINME
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heavy scribe but well felt
    release , express flow on
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was more than just a piece of your mind, that was a healthy portion. Take a bow, this emotive scribe is worthy of an award!!!!!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another great piece for the books, surely I can see that you and your :geek: have a real love affair...keep pumping vibes from it...we do enjoy it.
     
  5. PurpleMoons

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    Love your style Sister!
    Keep on bringing em!
     
  6. Ireadastory

    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the catagory for best creativity with deep heart felt emotion the Emmy goes to....FINDLOVEINME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Loved this, it's great when you can still find the good in the situations that you go through and the strength to keep pushin on.
     
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