Quiet Poetry Lounge : i've found U!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sahara heart, Oct 15, 2004.

  1. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the chaos, so much noise
    cars moving fast, children in the street
    turbulent days, hectic nights
    like the sound of heavy, fast falling rain drops
    our lives wash away
    we wonder who is gonna rescue us from ourselves?

    and like the bright rays of sun after the showers,
    we met.
    the fast moving world slowed down... for u, for me... for us


    time i spend with u,
    time i take to share,
    ravishes my soul
    no more noise for a precious moment...

    ...just my heart pouring out to yours
    your heart bringing back the vibe
    filling mine to the brim

    constantly...
    flooding each others' souls
    with wholeness that cannot be matched. :hearts2:
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice Sahara
    One would have to be in love to hear the silence of the world when you meet or one is with true :hearts2: love. This poem really captures the truth.


    ...just my heart pouring out to yours
    your heart bringing back the vibe
    filling mine to the brim

    WOW!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully laid out into a deep silent of the city street
    this speaks to me .......flow on sis.
     
  4. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Hodee, i love being in love. he just makes my heart swell... :blush:
    And thank you Rich, for all the comments on my work... they keep me going. :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome indeed one heart to another poeticly
     
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    AfroBoricuaRoni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BEAUTIFUL! Lovely. Splendid yo. I feel it.
     
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    ...i wish i knew ....love your work...your a great poet ..flow from your heart drop from ya mind ...hookup
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really liked the way you laid this. Amid all the hustle and bustle of everyday life, you seek and find time for the one who is important. Very nice flow.
     
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    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICH, thanks for the love! Afroboricuarani: words cannot express the way my heartfelt with those few words u left me!Blessings to U! wow HOOKUPMAN! see, i am so amazed by your comment that i dont even know what to write, thanks man! really did boost up my fading feeling of 'being a poet'. thanks soooo much! much love to you! WATZ, thanks for coming by one mo gain and leaving your always heartfelt mark!
     
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