Black Poetry : I've Fallen

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by renee31127, Sep 3, 2003.

  1. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like I was lost before you walked into my life//
    But in your arms I found myself//
    Falling deeper and deeper//
    In love is some place I never fell//
    But now that I’m down I don’t wanna get up//
    I feel like I’m walking on clouds//
    And as far as I travel I know I’ll never get tried//
    As long as you’re with me//
    Even when I’m without you I’m never alone//
    Cause your love stays inside me//
    The outside world can’t touch me//
    The way you can//
    How I feel with you in my life//
    It’s like some dream I don’t want to wake up from//
    The day we met we connected//
    So no matter how far apart we are//
    Our hearts are still linked//
    You’ll be in my life always//
    There when I need you//
    To give me what I want//
    To get from me something that you can’t get anywhere//
    That’s how far I’d go for you//
    I’ll do whatever I can to make sure you’re happy//
    Cause just being with you does it for me//
     
  2. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MMMMM....this sounds mad good girl...tha way you descibed this love you have...must be a lucky man for you to feel like that......i hope you continue to feel like that only because nowadays it is really hard to find a love you want and cherish..And when people actually do,they lose it.......one love ma....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very moving and sweet
    the unique bliss of love is captured
    inside this scribe ya heart is of warmth
    flow on !
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see you broke it down....fa real!

    I'm feeling this.....been here...still there:cool:
    so I caught your vibe, definitely!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice open up and just right there wide open...
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yall watch out now...my gurl renee is fallin and she like it lol :)
    lovely my sista for real...the brotha is blessed to have met a beautiful poetic soul like ya self :)
     
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