Quiet Poetry Lounge : I've Been Waiting for It

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, May 2, 2008.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the three of us were just sitting there

    and all i could do was stare

    there was a fragrance in the morning air

    a pleasure that wasn't there before

    i couldn't ignore it

    i had to explore it

    Howard adored it

    come on Eve, pour it



    i wanted to, but every time I looked at the score it said zero to zero

    could Howard really by my hero?

    could I trust him with my free throws?

    what about crunch time?

    it was easy to munch on his rhymes

    but brunch? I had a partner in crime



    Eve, it’s just lunch, I promise no basil and thyme



    i had a hunch, he was serious this time

    okay Howard, one Nestle’s Crunch but after that ….

    Yipeeeee ……. !!!!!!!!!!!

    Howard was delirious

    maybe the climb

    was worth it



    love,

    eve & howard
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sound like Howard got his chop on and hit a treasure mound of round
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was romantically laid howard, looks like you 2 are in it to win it.
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks $$rich$$ and watzinaname :wave:
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AHAHAAHAH!! Your Rhyming was ON POINT!

    I dont know Bro.
    But this Sure is a Fun Ride!!
    Flow On
     
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    Great exchange...always keeps me wondering what's gonna happen next.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome howard , now get eve to commit
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I smell......:look:.......:hearts2:
     
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