Quiet Poetry Lounge : I've Been Thinking

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Ladie_Of_Words, Dec 23, 2003.

  1. Ladie_Of_Words

    Ladie_Of_Words New Member MEMBER

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    Lately i've been thinking, that it's a strange feeling of concealing the world without really stealing away humane.....Da mn what you call it, I forgot that's why I'm thinking.
    Ive been thinking of a lot of ways to make my solid days become as one got dangit if i was my only inner child's son or daughter, father or mother would I be so..... so ashamed but the more I think the less I hate, the more I hate the less I, I think got Da mn tuff love stinks.
    IVe been thinking why the hell you all in my thoughts don't you got some of your own I rocked my head back and forth just so you can let it be known.
    Ive been thinking so much I can't think no more if that is so why I'm thinking right now if I should write anymore?
    Ive been thinkin why dont you think too because what I'm thinking some of my thoughts dont concern you. :new:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    again welcome very nice scribe u vibing
    lovin da flow not new no mo ya home upon
    family & friendz u kin now !
    thinking thinking thinking !!!!! continue ya flow
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to destee...
    nice write..
    lookin to read more...
     
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