Black Poetry : I've been here for a minute

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sarcasm4eva, Mar 24, 2004.

  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (inspired by Thatgirl74's 'Caught up')

    Can't get caught up,
    Even though I've been that way for yrs.
    That 1st kiss.
    That 1st touch.
    That 1st time I looked into ur eyes n became hypnotized.
    U were my 1st everything, although u didnt take me there.
    To the point where I wanted to scream ur name n tell u I just c*me.
    U lick ur lips and I lose all control.
    So give me what I want.
    Take it real slow.
    U know I'm never gonna let go.
    U instilled the freak in me, now she's in control.
    U ready to roll?
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    flow on....
     
  3. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx. much love :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Put in some spice and stirred, keep flowin.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *singin Johnny Gill* My My myyyyyyyyyyyyyy my my my my
    :lol:
    alrighty then lol
     
  6. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watz-- thanx 4 feeling this poem.

    triniti--lol. *hummin Silk's 'let me lick u up n down'* ::lol:: much love to everyone who responded :) :lol:
     
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