Black Poetry : I've adored you in and out of tyme ($$Rich$$ & ASP production)

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  1. asimplepoet

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    I've adored you in and out of time
    Every since you were first designed
    When the master fashioned your kind
    He must of had me on his divine mind
    For I'm enamored of every inch of you
    From the crown of you royal head
    To the sole of your blessed feet
    Deeped in special blend of choclate
    Filled with a burning fire and intensity
    Gentle as a lamb but strong as a lion
    ...
    I've adored you in and out of time

    Each moment in and out of tyme
    through my heart was a loyal kind
    a queen of royality built by design
    one that forever lay on my mind
    i've adored your womanly shine
    beyond any image before my eyez
    a caramel beauty of burning treasure
    a tender soul dat's never measured
    made for a king's of deep desires
    unto tis day to build our empire
    ...
    I've adored you in and out of tyme
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Laid out like a red carpet , your talent is above and beyond that's legendary
     
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    You both did this justice.

    This is how it should be, how it's supposed to be.

    Black men and women need to realize that we are not each other's enemy.

    With that kind of healing, we could build empires once again.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Big thankz sister Cherryblossom i really enjoyed this one asimplepoet is awesome...

    I hope one day you and I can do a piece together as well !
     
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    very nice....
    i agree with cb...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz man she took it there i just followed ........
     
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    Had to bring this back how beautifully it was laid
     
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