Black Poetry : It'z Sick! A Cry 2 B Equal!

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  1. nfinite

    nfinite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heard them preach
    Heard them teach my people
    Dreams of better days and better ways
    For what will never come
    Heard the peaceful melodies drum
    Continuously in my mental
    Although I’ve lived in my sin till
    The daybreaks
    Until my soul takes
    A free fall
    You see being true
    Is being who I am
    Not a woman or man
    But she
    Powerful black
    Gay and in everyway
    I shine
    In divine
    LIGHT
    And the fight
    For equal ways
    Between straights and gays
    Seems to drift away
    And the words Bush says
    “It just ain’t right!”
    Although the sight of the real problem seems to fade
    Jobs are lost but moral dignity takes the blame
    Cuz bull**** is the name
    Of the game
    And politics plays the pieces
    Ignorance never ceases in the face
    The white man
    The right man
    The brown man
    I’m down man!
    Itz sick!
    The trick the ploy
    The girls the boys
    Can’t see the doctor
    Cuz momma can’t pay
    Healthcare slowly fading
    Benefits slipping away
    But all you can see
    Is me
    My life
    My strife
    Cuz I choose a wife!
    Itz sick!
    Now that morality overtakes the government
    Cuz now morality over took the government
    It gives way to blind the real deal
    To blind the real feel of patriotism
    Too blind to get the real feel of equality
    Cuz spirituality is the reason you stress the issue
    But did you
    Take a minute to look inside
    See the beauty that is love
    Although not defined by your words
    You may listen but I am still unheard
    Live life in my shoes as a conglomerate mutt
    But know what
    Really undermines this nation
    Lies, fraud, judgment rhyme together in one syncopation
    Sing your song of liberty
    But die my your own hand
    We will never reach unity
    Until we try to understand peace
     
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    You Tell it Sister!
    Let the message
    be Heard!

    Tyte Scribing!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome ! to destee.com poetic playground
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    most powerful
    if only these minds could all understand
    and reach some level of harmony
    i'm feeling it keep scrybing

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    nfinite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    APPRECIATED!!!!!!!DA LUV IS MOST DEFINATELY APPRECIATED! Hey Rich i want to join but for some reason my computer will not allow me??????whatz up wit that??????
     
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    Your scribe speaks loudly of the feelings within of being left out. Keep writing poet.
     
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    Awesome work, ..you're a very, very wise person.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    keep singing poet...sing for peace..
    twas a nice piece.....thanks for it...for you
     
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    realeyezrealize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace

    As you express deep concern,
    which finds it's rise
    at every turn of events, or moments of demise
    which I think you agree
    are all formated through lies, preceived as absolute
    Try to consider this, change is evident, but I am not saying cope or accept, yet to neglect the efforts that have been made is to waste the years of those who endured much more than we've ever faced
    in that burtal way. If you wanna talk about bondage expose the captivity of the mind.
    And where do you find peace, let that be released. The true victory is obtainable, know that those whom you suggest do not minister the final authority, there is a higher power than submitting to human beings.
    My reality is actaully limitless freedom, though a dream to some I wont allow or cowar or accept that I can not make it. What is this war over ,more control, well my souls at peace. Though some still wonder in lack, we all must do our part to rebuild this society from injustice, violence, and poverty.
    You speak unity but by what means. Reconcilation, let your mind be at peace,please.
     
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