Black Poetry : ...itsallLove. (for Sherykah)

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    have i told You late-ly…
    how beautiful You are to me?

    Your strength is like
    the tenacity of the tide—
    continuous-ly ebbing
    & flowing…
    constant-ly rising
    & growing…
    ‘til all that’s left behind
    is a pristine shoreline
    that is akin to the divine
    lovliness that infinite-ly
    shines from your gentle spirit…
    & although some have
    neglected it & others
    didn’t appreciate it…
    you & your friendship
    are flowers to MY soul…
    & slow-ly but sure-ly
    i’m becoming whole (again)
    simp-ly from being
    afforded the chance to
    fully experience the
    vastness of your kind heart…
    it’s like… from the start—
    You were meant to be
    a part of my life &
    You have unconditional-ly
    welcomed me into yours
    (just like long-lost sisters do)
    & i’m forever thankful
    for You… reaching out to me
    teaching me… knowing me
    & showing me (by example)
    what it means to be extraordinary.



    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    awwwwww

    :love:

    *group hug* :lol:

    pd
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed a group kiss
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece is filled with warmth.
    Thanks for sharing. :)

    Poeitcally Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AWWWWWW!
    This is what friendship should be. Makes me want to be a better friend. I love you, man!!!
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dizz Lil' Ma!

    Sunshower This is a beautiful love poem...! It's hard to find good true peeps deez daze! Hold on to good friendships.

    Im holdin on to ourz! But you still get on my **** nerves...lol
    Madd Love
    Reas
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AlwaysThanks.


    thanks everybody for comin' in on this one!!

    i was havin' a conversation with my sis Sunday &
    this piece just flowed outta my fingertips! :D

    & WBMPW... you are foreva my constant friend!!
    you KNOW that!! what would i do without you??

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    adefinitediva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a madd vibe GA. . . quite touching.
     
  9. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwww, daayyyuuummmm....

    You done messed around and jerked a tear.

    It's truly a blessing to have someone feel that way about you and even more so to feel that way about someone.

    Dang! Now I got to go and run up my phone bill again...
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diva. thank you for takin' the time!! i appreciate
    your response!! :)

    MsB. don't be cryin' & stuff!! this is supposed to
    be a happy piece!! (LOL) my big sis do get me that
    way tho... when she ain't gettin' on my **** nerves!
    :lol: thanks for the read!!
     
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