Black Poetry : Its time.....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coming from my heart
    Roaming in my mental
    Placing the words carefully
    As I open up and let it just flow
    I tried to work this out
    I tried to talk to you
    Have you understand
    But you closed me out…
    Told me I was silly just crazy
    Never really looking within me
    To see I have grown….
    Knowing I am a woman
    Not a child…..with a mind
    of my own…..
    The feeling I know is not the same…
    It was like a game within a dream..
    Trying so long to hold on..
    but it is no longer easy.
    Some say I was a fool to even give you
    The chance to hurt my heart….
    Deprive me of a life I wanted…
    The fights
    the yelling
    the belittling
    And then when you hit me
    I stay thinking it would be ok
    Thinking…………..
    It was all
    my fault…
    But you never felt my pain
    As I slowly die inside
    Folded away not to be seen
    And no one not even you
    Took a chance to
    notice……
    I know its time to move on..
    But your all I know
    So how do I?
    my mind and soul
    twisted in this change.
    But its time to move on……
    From my heart I broke down and cried
    Because I never knew what love was…..
    But I stayed…..in the darkness of my mind
    Depression sat
    Screaming in a hush
    Yearning to break out its walls…
    but you didn’t notice
    sad when I thought
    I could grow to love you
    But I grew and closed myself in….
    Wasted my time
    Lost my dream
    Older and wiser
    But all I know is your way….
    Now it is time to
    Learn my way
    and be who I am to be…
    its time to
    move
    on……….

    A blkangel thang.....2004
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was tight mzblk....
    keep it moving....
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Daaaaaaaaaaang!!!!

    mba.....
    wow, girl.....you know you hittin spots where I been bruised....goodness, girl, you doin the dang thang...on the real.
     
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    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes
    loving yourself after someone else's
    touch/mistouch
    is like
    playing a woodwind instrument with wax lips
    and winter gloves


    one love,
    /antar
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love
    errybody
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was awesome sweet and warm felt like i was there beside u
    wow !!!!
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Rich
    glad ya likes
    feelin da flow...
    cool
    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. Harry Hyman

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    Your words from the heart captivated my mental. I kept thinking of a flower just learning to grow. Penetrating scribe, well penned. HH
     
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    Mahvalous

    I really liked the work it was like a circle never broken and it just spoke to me lol keep up the good work

    ~peace and love always~ :spin:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks ofr the love yall
    Peace
    Angel