Black Poetry : It's The Way

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  1. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's the way you look at me.
    It's the way you kiss me your full lips on the top of mine.
    Your tounge caressing mine.
    Your hands in my hair playfully twirling it in your fingers.

    It's the way you touch me.
    Your hands gently in mine moving them up and down my body.
    MMMMM It's the things you do to me
    its an never ending feeling of pleasure.
    How you do it I do not know.

    But it's the way you make me laugh.
    How you make me smile.
    It's the way you see me without seeing
    know me without knowing.
    It's the complete and total pleasure
    on your face when I touch you, kiss you.

    You have that something.
    That something I am drawn to. That something I want.
    It's how I close my eyes and dream of you
    those sweet dreams that make me want to sleep forever.

    It's the way you hold me in your big strong arms
    pulling me closer to your body holding me tight.
    It's how you want need me how you want me.

    It's the way you make love to me.
    You sliding in and out of me
    going deeper and deeper with every thrust of your hips.
    It's how you say my name over and over.

    It's the way I lye down on top of you
    and fall asleep to the beat of your heart.
    It's the way you are.
    That something I can't explain.
    That mystery I enjoy uncovering.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sound like a king to love and a man to hold in your grasp
    this was sweetly done and felt
     
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    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you.
     
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    Hey FattnBeautiful
    Gosh this is nice. I just love the smoothness
    Of your poem and how it made me smile as I read on.
    Loving this love poem. Very nice

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    Sends so much electricity through the veins, great testimony of passion
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    definitely ain't

    mad at ya playa

    peace