Khasm13 : it's taken them over...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    the saturated surfices of this purple bliss
    a sick kiss from the mist of babylonian cyst in the abyss
    of darkness when the park is at it's most peaceful state
    the air evaporates over the magistrate passing hate on a slate
    of papyprus the mental virus of osirus trys to bait and hire us
    with fire dust while the weak rust and the strong run from the incubus
    the ilk of ill influences be choose'n this path of truancies which results in broken knees
    soul deep like church underneath the seas screamin Lord please
    these creatures and leeches with grissly features...climb steep and reaches
    for the teachers keys...the sly synthentic is a man-made curse
    while whispers worm for the worst unsettled secrets get pursed
    addiction is well versed and heavy handed thas why he demanded
    that a palatino linotype A get's branded
    on the arm of stranded sheep too cheap to purchase a barn
    cause'n them to gravitate to the filth flarn
    darn
    da killa capsules snatch those who froze with candy on their nose
    the more biopharmaceutical executables prove suitable the more insanity grows
    in the search for pros...cons multiply and outnumber
    in the priceless pathway to perpetual slumber
    with eyes red almost dead someone screams
    they are going under...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word ! dis here is hot off da press
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    reading this first i got sad
    then felt real bad this was deep
    and off it...loving ya style my brother
    its like a story in poetry forum
    you always take me on dat ride with you
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Addictions are...a momentary bliss before an untimely death. You have such a way with descriptive verse...wow.
     
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    smh...you can say this again...
    I completely feel this piece
    on so many levels...
    and applied within so many venues...

    This had the tyteness and the truth...
    Go on witcha baaad self poet...
    I'm watchin...
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm- u really have a way wit words and im really loving ur style...
    this was sumin else.. thanks
     
  7. Khasm13

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    in the end...it'll be your only friend...
    in the end...it'll be your only friend...

    thanks fam....
    one love
    khasm
     
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