Black Poetry : it's strange* (part too)

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    things.
    confuse.
    me.

    like how my body slowly flexes toward your heaven--
    the twists and turns you take
    make.
    sean.
    tremble.

    it's strange how
    you are painted across the front of my brain--
    so that my eyes catch glimpse of you--

    continually*

    got this thin frame--
    bent toward your eyes
    your lips*
    your every speech--
    you.
    make.
    me.
    weak.

    it's strange how

    sex doesn't matter much--
    but--
    your touch--

    *determines my existence--

    i'm lost in caramel--

    but it's strange

    cuz she ain't lost in me.


    sean.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WELL NOW

    I WONDER WHY WE TAKE THOSE TURNS
    GET LOST INTO HER SOUL YET
    SHE NOT KNOW OF US !!?
    U SAID A MOUTH FULL.....:(
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks $RICH$

    *honored*



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    Strange

    It is strange how it all affects us--when sex becomes a periphery event we know we have surpassed our humaness--well done--well done--Amun-Ra

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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ya know!


    love and blessings...

    sean.
     
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