Black Poetry : it's strange* (from afronet)

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's strange
    that i can
    see her--
    and look in her eyes and feel what she feels and--
    want to know her and--
    want to touch her mental and arouse her completely
    but--
    it's strange how--
    i see her and see her
    but have only seen her once.
    it's
    strange how--
    my words seep into
    the anticipation of
    speech with this beautiful black being
    blessing bundles and bushels of bountiful
    benevolence she brings about with every
    bunch of letters she coagulates thru speech--
    i wanna sing when she talks,
    and i would if i could--
    it's just
    so
    strange...

    (tobecontinued)

    sean
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes... please continue on...
    thirsting for more....
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh lawd!

    Brother of the FLYGHT-- i must thank you for the read. as always, you got me trying to fly!

    W7-- thanx for the read wildflower. I gotta pt.2 coming...
    lay around for it!


    sean.
     
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    IT'S STRANGE...

    :toast: :toast:
    I DON'T REMEMBER READING THIS ON AFRONET. I LIKE THIS THOUGH. VERY NICE.
    :toast: :toast:
     
  6. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all 4 the read and reply

    your thoughts are greatly appreciated.


    sean.:eek:
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thepoetsean

    i am definitely inspired by your thoughts & the writing of your pen... I can't wait to see what the part 2 of this piece holds.

    Bring out Thepoetsean from within his SOUL!!


    One :heart:
     
  8. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diggin the flow of this here piece
    Nice work poet! Jyntl
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2 and Jyntl

    thanks for the read.
    and for diggin the peece

    peace.
    espee.
     
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