Black Poetry : Its So Hard

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    walkin this earth in circles, constantly bumpin into things
    thought that id survive if i stayed away from pain
    but everywhere i go, its likely to follow me
    as soon as i think im safe, it slowly swallows me

    dont get me wrong, ive been blessed by the works of our lord
    which im truly, honestly, gratefully, thankful for
    but man... is life suppose to be this hard? Cuz im begginin to think so
    and if surviving is half the battle, tell me how far i have to go

    all i have is my heart, this ball, and my brain
    and let me tell u my thoughts run thicker and faster than the blood in my veins
    they travel from my brain to my pen to my pad
    then to this website to those who read this and understand

    i know yall understand cuz u got ur problems too
    we all recieve them
    if every sin can have the same effect, so can ur problems
    its all in how u concieve them

    stress and responsibility exist in the same category
    pain just decides to guide itself in
    i dont know the anedote, but if u do
    show me, tell me, and ill try my best to mend

    man.... its so hard.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man I know its hard
    But you have to turn on the light
    Don't wait for no one to help you
    [email protected] wil never turn out right

    **** was tyte soon :smile3:
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The greater the problems are, the greater a testiment to the strength of a person those problems are. Since God never gives us more than we can bear(though it may not seem so)
    there are solutions though rarely is the path an easy one
    I felt you, poet and I know you can pull through
    the better for it.
    Peace to ya!
     
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    LOVE AND TIME!

    What is the anctedote what is the cure....Love is the medicine that I am sure...Time gives you patience and trials build charachter, hold on to your faith and believe in yourself!
    I know that these things helped me in my darkest hour...but of all these things LOVE/GOD IS THE HEALING POWER!

    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!:peace: :peace: :peace: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    keep the faith and love u pose
    this won't last long ya heart of love & faith will
    ova come it all
     
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    I'm feeling you. As I read your words I'm saying to myself Damm! How do I get rid of this ill feeling?
     
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    the anedote,
    is patience.
    most of the time,
    we don't feel like waitin'.
    but we must realize,
    that patience is a virtue.
    it haunts me,
    as well as you.
    yes it's hard,
    no one said life was slick.
    we all have to put up,
    with feeling from your list.
    keep yo head up,
    bcuz eventually time will end.
    i don't know if u think this is an anedote,
    but the game "LIFE" i play--helped me win.
    what are the good times,
    if we don't have bad ones to realize.
    the tribulations we go through,
    are like the wind that rise.
    we can't stop them,
    only make them go away.
    today--tomorrow--the future,
    only God has the say.
    to when time will end,
    but i say time is of no more.
    bcuz when we get to heaven,
    we'll all recieve our own score.
    so now i will end this,
    and hope you enject this anedote.
    and take into consideration,
    the words i have wrote..............(u really said alot on life)
     
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