Black Poetry : "Its so Hard Stuglin'" (A lil' short but worth peepin')

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  1. Scruplez

    Scruplez New Member MEMBER

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    Its so hard out there stuglin'/
    Its so hard always hustlin'/
    Its so hard I cant take it/
    Its so hard I wont make it/

    Life puts pressure on me I jus cant cope with/
    I strive to stay alive yet I still fill hopeless/
    At 15 I learned quite a bit bout reality/
    Understandin' I'm traped by laws and technicalitys/
    Although I'm a vandal this ***** still got heart/
    I'm too young to have my traped inside that black cart/
    1 day I wanna to have kids and such/
    It troubles me hear people say they dont give a ****/
    Yeah I smoke weed indeed but I belive theres mo' fo' me to achieve/
    I want to suceed and fill my pockets with bank/
    But is so hard cause the greed in this world stank/
    ***** in my world its all gats and guns/
    Its so hard struglin' jus' to grasp some funds/
     
  2. Destee

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    my Mother told me ...

    when there is no more struggle
    the life is gone


    that is what life is
    one struggle or another
    climbing one mountain
    or walking thru one valley

    hard looks good when you get on the other side of it

    :)
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we all struggle but we leave the gats at home...

    at 15, you only think you know about reality.
    AND
    if your reality is filled with drugs and gats and hopes for the bengamins fill your every waking moment, you're missing out on the big picture...and will never achieve what you believe is your destiny.
    THINK...
    LIFE IS GOOD
    but not if you're confined to a 6'8' jail cell asking permission to ****.

    LET YOUR ACTIONS BE POSITIVE ONES.

    baller.
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice poem short and deep nice flow
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SHORT AND DEEP (NOTHIN' SWEET ABOUT IT) I'M DIGGING THIS!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe u vibe i feel ya the struggle continue
    i agree wit destee.......that's how it be
    but one day some way some how we shall struggle
    no more
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You depicted the struggle well.
    It seems you are at least on
    the path to wisdom.
    feelin the flow!
     
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