Black Poetry : It's so bittersweet

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  1. pinkfighter

    pinkfighter Member MEMBER

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    It's so bittersweet

    Can't you hear?
    Every morsel of my body is aching for you?
    This is how my body talks to you.
    Can't you see?
    Every time i think of you my heart swells for you?
    Remember who possess my heart, it is you.

    I was afraid of this.
    Afraid that i would want you this bad.
    So bad
    that it hurts me because you make me weak for needing you.
    So bad
    that it eases my heart when i think of you.
    So can there be anything more bittersweet than this?
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You pinkfighter
    For the flow!

    Welcome to Destee

    It is so nice when someone you know and love can make you feel complete.
    The fear is real, the fear is there.
    The surrender that it takes makes one feel vunerable.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome within poeticly ...wow bittersweet always a taste dat's lifeless
    nice flow here
     
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    Harry Hyman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pinkfighter - Love is unrelenting in its onslaught to the senses. You've effectively captured the yearning and the burning, both often bettersweet. That takes talent. Well done. HH
     
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    Thanks so much guys! it means a lot to hear you liked my poem.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello Pinkfighter...

    Love can move us in a lot of ways. Welcome to Destee and thanks for sharing with us.


    Feelinitsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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