Black Poetry : Its real

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Jan 23, 2010.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its real

    Rust in my plain quotes so I can’t trust sane folks they may
    Get it twisted and do a ballistic interpretation cause a bad day
    Parade drink wine but it degrade my mind when I’m drunk
    Like a grenade sometime I blow up, flow corrupt as a chump
    For lyrics I crave my spirit is brave stakes are high but yo
    Make a mistake and reply to foolishness leave a blueish mess
    Inside my brain then my pride drain through a small hole don’t test
    Me because I’m pushing clown while my brain making a whooshing
    Sound the struggle is a puzzle that never ended yo never went where
    I was intended to go but ended up where I belong home here and there
    On microphones with tones of rappers ripping strong chapters word for
    Word, live in a vicinity it’s easy to forgive the enemy who has a bazaar
    Identitybut for friends the hate never end best watch your back
    May see great wisdom after you create a system to detect false whack
    Attitudes, devastated the lands with an uneducated plans shook whole nations
    With book quotations so being a author I’m seeing proper pages in relation
    To reality, write unique on paper not prepared to meet my maker for real
    It’s a great ordeal hire sincere tutors don’t fear computers how would it feel
    Without them doe?, face srife with knife, life is nice death is peace but its revealed
    Through tradition that the transition is troublesome like bubblegum yall know the deal
    It’s painful
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was REALly dope keep doing that which you do
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man......... u said it best fo real !
     
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