Black Poetry : It's Raining

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PoeticAlize, May 31, 2006.

  1. PoeticAlize

    PoeticAlize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    its raining
    my thoughts
    are gone
    just remnants
    of
    you
    and
    me
    an entity
    that came
    and went
    i hum
    a song
    our song
    that song
    comforting words
    your words
    come to me
    cum in me
    deep within
    my walls
    guarded walls
    shattered walls
    shattered dreams
    a tear
    falls
    its raining
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    It's raining
    from the glist
    of u
    as i
    capture da
    sweet dropplets
    of essence
    as i hum
    this song
    our song
    through da
    depth
    of my slumber
    as another tear
    falls
    it's raining.......

    This was well felt , made me flow in the warmth of it , tyte poetic maze.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There was so much beauty in this melancholy flow poet.
     
  4. Ikoro

    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I totally dug it.

    *bows*

    ~Ikoro
     
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