Black Poetry : it's over...times up!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Dec 7, 2004.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Time is up.
    The story has come to an end.
    Time put in.
    Take nothing out.
    Why bother you ask.
    Is it love?
    Is it lust?
    Who knows?
    Who cares?
    Did you give all you had to give?
    I guess not.
    Maybe it should never have been.
    Wrong time and place perhaps.
    Gonna get this thing right someday.
    Gonna make the connection that last a lifetime.
    One day I guess.
    Two steps forward.
    Ten steps bacward.
    I'm f**ked up now.
    Gotta start all over.
    Don't want to play games.
    Don't want to be on the scene.
    But I gotta get this thing right.
    So back I go.
    Lonely nights.
    Bullsh*t conversations.
    All I got is GOD.
    I pray he got me.​

    caramelpython​
    Jagged-Python Inc​
    2004​
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man this was red hot and deep as the sea
    starting ova times up ! whewwwwwww! bruh !
     
  3. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hi: My brother and thanks alot 4 the support. :weights:
     
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    dude...your on fire today...
    i felt this piece to da bone son...
    gotta keep it moving...follow the Lord's signs and tune in...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    december 7th,2004...carmelpython day at Destee...the creativity
    award....
     
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    nice poem man...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very strong piece....keep it flowing...Angel
     
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    He's got ya brotha, even when you think he doesn't. Some things you think are over truly are, and then there are those things that you just need to let steep for a while and then return for another try. Keep flowing, I'll sure keep reading.
     
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    Tightness!!!! And I'm so feelin ya. :kickball:
     
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    Whoa...
    the energy beneath
    these words were
    torrential...

    been there...done that...
    got the t-shirt, mug...
    and everything else, smh

    the way you scribed this
    was so real...loved it!
     
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