Black Poetry : It's over, at least for Now

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Caesarlee31, May 12, 2002.

  1. Caesarlee31

    Caesarlee31 Active Member MEMBER

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    Thinking of now
    and the advent of new line excuses,
    I have been given reason to set aside my pen
    and get lost - n - isolated thought.
    That has closed my mouth
    opened my ears
    and put me in touch
    with feelings I ponder
    and frankly wish never exsisted.

    like the one of loving Jezebelle
    in all her many forms
    and being torn between the idea
    and the reality of heartache and love
    risks taken but never thought through
    and through all the smoke sunshine
    i'd do it again.

    My Love for you is over,
    and no pretence can overshadow that fact
    I love you for now
    but that is a fact left up to time and action
    and as for that and also for now I hate you
    because your life and your priorities, and your wants
    came before I, that cost the loss of material
    goods found pawned to pay your way out of my life.

    for now you smile and pretend that I we are friends
    when the fact that friendships
    yours are bought and or borrowed
    I am still hurting a little
    for now.:cool:
     
  2. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i felt like you punched me in the stomach...very to the point...dig yourself...she should read this. Like it, like it, like it.
     
  3. Caesarlee31

    Caesarlee31 Active Member MEMBER

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    LOL just feeling the day and all the hues there in.
    trying 2B
     
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