Black Poetry : It's ok to miss somebody....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Jan 28, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You said it's ok to miss someone.
    and it is, ok...
    to ease your mind
    takes more than a day
    Weeks, months, years,
    sometimes a lifetime goes by.
    And we still have to
    ask ourselves, why?
    Why couldn't you hold on?
    Why couldn't you wait?
    Why did you have to get out
    of dodge by my birth date?
    The answers to some questions
    are longer than you've been waiting
    to find out the reasons for all the
    hesitating
    fabricating
    recreating
    the wheel, it keeps on turning
    like the world just keeps revolving
    around us, around you
    and the one who left, without solving
    the problems. I'm sorry you're sad.
    He'll always love you, and he'll always be
    your dad.
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a heartfelt piece.

    Very touching.

    Nice.
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for letting me know it touched you, positivemindset, I appreciate that.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this really touched me deeply and heartly
    this was the main line that captured me ....

    (He'll always love you and He'll always be your Dad )

    very heart felt piece
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A love for one's own remains, despite it all...thanks for the read, and responding as you do, Rich.
     
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    I'm so feelin your flow, watz. Lord. I appreciate this.
     
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    aww man...





    this was heartfeld...





    Love l
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for feelin this, gempis and Libertylady, and for responding.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sister this was a deep scribe
    that tugged at the heart strings
    an all too often conversation
    that has to be had and yet
    there is no easy way to say it

    feeling your flow
     
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    Watzinaname.. again you laid down a deep flow.

    You miss them for a lifetime.
     
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