Black Poetry : Its not you its me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by UniqueOne, May 6, 2003.

  1. UniqueOne

    UniqueOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 14, 2003
    Messages:
    61
    Likes Received:
    2
    Location:
    Georgia
    Ratings:
    +2
    Don't give me that
    its not you its me routine
    mean what you say
    say what you mean
    you don't have to justify
    or try to explain why
    you chose to do what you did
    just do what you do
    and get it over with
    2 years in a relationship and now it's time to pack your things
    hope you don't think i'm giving back the ring
    i'm keeping it as a soveriner
    i'll look at it and smile
    but never shed a tear
    i'm a woman not your child
    i heard it all before
    a time or two ago
    no need for you to wait
    your things are at the door
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 10, 2003
    Messages:
    832
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    High School Teacher
    Location:
    Atlanta
    Ratings:
    +2
    OOOOhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh gurl that waz da shiznit! lol I can relate I can relate, it's good you didn't let him get to you. peace and blessins keep flowin gurl.
     
  3. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 19, 2003
    Messages:
    593
    Likes Received:
    17
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +17
    preach it, preach it gurl..........tyte poem...much love :)
     
  4. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 26, 2003
    Messages:
    1,172
    Likes Received:
    7
    Occupation:
    Living
    Location:
    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
    Ratings:
    +7
    say that! U gotta let em know, cuz sometimes they like to slip up, great flow. keep em comin!
     
  5. Dupe

    Dupe Active Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 25, 2003
    Messages:
    26
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    Braid hair
    Location:
    Georgia
    Ratings:
    +0
    That is what i'm talkin bout gurl you ripped it that was to deep got my attention a yo why don't chek out some of poetry and e-mail me your reply that was hot
     
  6. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 9, 2003
    Messages:
    1,182
    Likes Received:
    13
    Occupation:
    LAW ENFORCEMENT SOMETHING!?!
    Location:
    CHICAGO, ILL-NOIZE (EVANSTON)
    Ratings:
    +13
    OK. THIS WAS ON POINT!!! SHE'S KEEPING IT AS A SOUVENEIR, SHE'LL LOOK AT IT AND SMILE....HERE GOES THE REST..

    i'm a woman not your child
    i heard it all before
    a time or two ago
    no need for you to wait
    your things are at the door


    NOW THAT'S HOT SH**....COULDN'T LET THIS ONE SLIP TO PAGE THREE..BACK TO PAGE ONE.
     
  7. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 9, 2003
    Messages:
    1,182
    Likes Received:
    13
    Occupation:
    LAW ENFORCEMENT SOMETHING!?!
    Location:
    CHICAGO, ILL-NOIZE (EVANSTON)
    Ratings:
    +13
    OH AND I CAN SEE YOU LOOKING AT THE RING...YOU'RE MAD, BUT SOOO CALM ALL AT THE SAME TIME...I CAN FEEL IT...

    YOU GOT ME HYPE....ok, i'm back to normal now. hello!!!
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 16, 2003
    Messages:
    2,781
    Likes Received:
    15
    Occupation:
    College Student, Bookstore Clerk
    Location:
    ...down south...
    Ratings:
    +16
    this was tyte.......i can relate 100%.............i loved this!!