Black Poetry : ITS NOT THAT DEEP...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Oct 8, 2003.

  1. MORE

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    Dayum
    i've been sittin here
    thinking of how many times
    i had dreams of you

    how i let u walk in and out
    my life, at ur own free will
    never really asking u to explain
    why u've returned.

    anything to keep the argument silent
    to make peace not violence
    but ur much to much to appreciate
    a queens touch....

    how i go over board
    above and beyond the board
    drowning under your ship
    planks knocked me unconscious

    it's a trip.

    cause i only want one thing
    and u are keeping it from me
    so u know what
    keep it

    cause now that i think about it

    it's not that deep.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

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    not that deep dig dat..
    like the flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis here speaks out within it self
    not da deep ! wheeeeew..........
    but tyte as woooooweeeeee!
    feelin ya
     
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    tyte girl!
     
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    [email protected], this is tyte. [email protected] I feel u, reminds me of my ex yo. It wasnt that deep...it wasnt much of anything...lol.
     
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    This piece needs to be posted on a billboard in every large city so that people can stop stressing over relationships that aren't worth it.
     
  7. MORE

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    wow, thanks, that is a high compliment!:kiss: :kiss:
     
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    :laugh: :laugh: :uhoh:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh fa sho gurl glad u see that :wink:
     
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