Black Poetry : ITS NOT ALL HER FAULT

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Oct 23, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I MET THIS GIRL A YEAR AND A WEEK AGO
    HAD A REP OF BEING A FREAK N H0
    BLACK AND ASIAN
    STACKED AND BLAZING
    BODY SHAPED LIKE A COKE BOTTLE
    GOAL IS TO BE SUPERSTAR OR MODEL
    I HEARD THE RUMORS
    HOW DUDES TURN HER SEX STORIES INTO HUMOR
    DROPPED OUT OF SCHOOL
    SHES NOT A FOOL
    SHE JUST PREFERS TO USE OTHER TOOLS
    TO GET TO THE TOP OF THE STOOL
    CHASING DUDES WITH LARGE CASH FLOW
    DOESNT MATTER AS LONG AS HER NECK N WRIST GLOW
    IT GOES BACK WHEN SHE WAS YOUNGER
    AND SHE WITNESSED HER MOTHER
    SHOOTIN HER ARM N SOMEONE SHOOT HER BROTHER
    AND HER FATHER
    CAUSED HER
    MORE PAIN AT THE AGE OF TEN
    HE GOT ON TOP OF HER
    AND ROBBED HER
    OF HER INNOCENCE, THATS WHY SHE ACTS THAT WAY WITH MEN
    IN THE CLUB, SOLICITATIN HER CAT
    JUST TO GET A TASTE OF CRISTAL N COGNAC
    SHES MADD TRIFE
    LOST IN THE FAST LIFE
    HAD 3 ABORTIONS TO CARRY OUT HER DREAM
    BUT SHE DONT KNOW MONEY PUTS A PRICE ON FAIRYTALE SCHEMES
    LOST TOUCH WITH HER FRIENDS
    JUST TO GRASP HER ENDS
    SHE LOST HER IDEAL ON REALITY
    CUZ SHES WITNESSED DECIET AND MORTALITY
    I DONT BLAME HER CUZ ITS WHAT HER WHACK WORLD CAUSED
    SHES NOT IGNORANT, SHES JUST A BLACK GIRL LOST
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice flow to sadly tale
    of a gurl whom dewell
    lost in the world of no
    justice ......tyte scribe
    so many young one get caught up in myth of life and streets
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you back on top of yo game,
    earned the fame,
    to yo name.
    all things have remained,
    cuz no one ever changed,
    the one that went insane.
    only told the girl she should be ashamed,
    made her think she was to blame,
    and now she turn tricks cuz the only other things she can turn to is pain.........
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl, this is SO tight! Very very nice.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice:toast:..this was one tyte *** flow...had me thinking about all the h0es in the world that might have a story like hers......
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice girl...very nice...
     
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    Mmmmm.

    Makes you take a step back and think before judging.

    So nice.
     
  8. URGelus

    URGelus Active Member MEMBER

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    Sad flow, but oh too true! I know a couple females that fit this description.



    Scribe on

    URGelus
     
  9. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yea true enough i know some too, sad story...
     
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