Black Poetry : It's Morning....

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  1. 1hotvirgowoman

    1hotvirgowoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The day has dawned,
    slowly I yawn,
    arms stretched up and akimbo

    I look to my left, then to my right
    an empty space, visions of what took place last night,
    My handsome Prince, not yet a King (but on his way)
    is no where in sight

    But hark-I hear, footsteps soo familiar
    closer to me they are coming
    He's almost here, he's in my sight
    I smile a smile, most cunning

    Ebong, my Prince, my handsome Prince...
    I'm grinning from ear to ear-
    so glad that he's mine, my valentine
    and to me, it's ever soo clear

    that, he Loves me,

    shows me but does not tell,
    healed me when I was sick,
    was there when most, had chosen to Abandon I,
    cried when I cried, was never selfish-Selfless, in fact, he was
    and still is,
    acted as my spine-held me up and kept me there,
    my supporter, my ace.......I see your face, in ALL that I do,
    most gracious Prince, your inner beauty shines through

    soo many things, we've done together,
    I'll never forget you, cuz you are here
    in my arms, you are
    the one I hold dear, in my heart, Ebong.........


    I LOVE YOU

    Really and truly..........
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Quite an endearing piece, your words shined like rays of sunshine poetess.
     
  3. 1hotvirgowoman

    1hotvirgowoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aww Shucks!... Thank You Watzinanname:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    So beautifully spoken of da heart dat leaves a glow upon life
     
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    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that's what's up

    got to be real... these feelings of true, unadulterated luv. It's like dancing the tango. It takes two.
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was sweet and loving
    so keep flowin
     
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