Black Poetry : Its like...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Aug 9, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just a free flow....

    Floating up high in the mix with the passion..
    Floating in his arms…
    High above the sky….massive love attack!!

    Took my breath.... :blush:

    Like poison running through my veins he took me
    With one look, religiously he touch my soul
    Reworded my thoughts…yes I am in submission
    Touch my inner woman and cover my being.

    As the stairways of love, take us to heaven.
    Compassion in the light, as he touch me
    What are you going to do? I feel your heart
    Calling me, in a strong embrace,
    You fold me in the stairwells of passion,
    Finding this woman’s pleasure
    In every measure…releasing my all.
    Now that you know what are you going to do?

    Taste my love? Feel all your dreams?
    Take me inside your palms and hold me tight…
    What you thought was, look within my heart….
    There you will see the woman that I am…

    Knowing I love you the way you are,

    No beating around the bush,

    For its all real….I love you :heart:

    (c) 2004
     
  2. who~is~she

    who~is~she Active Member MEMBER

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    that was beautiful. i hope to experiece that one day.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful scribe heart felt theme
    as it runs sweetly like a gem
    why waste time express it in shine
    let it be known ya love & mind
    tyte drop on da spot cascading
    da visional maze and da lovin crave
    no need to hide no need to run
    bring da love come get some
    to feel da compassion
    and kiss da warmth hold it in cover
    of the ravishing lover
    lay in da comfort of thee
    and feel the bliss sweetly
    know the arms of engagement
    and the pleasure of measurement
    drift into da zone and let da vows
    roam as a song in da heart
    is where true love start so speaketh
    and hear da whispers of tongue and
    da rapture comes ........whewwww!!

    dis was tyte flowing i had to bounce to da beat
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    who~is~she..thank you for the love on dis...

    rich...rich...richie rich...wheeeeew loving ya flow in
    loving ya bounce of the beat man oh man..
    do you be up in my mind or what?

    the warmth of his soul fills mine
    as the vision is release upon the orbs
    i hold my love in the light
    as he takes my being to higher levels
    High above the sky….massive love attack!!
    takes my breath...as we become one.
    love your drop Rich!!!!!:kiss:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You described what it's like to a "T". Very nice vibe here.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks watz for the support on dis scribe....