Black Poetry : It's Just Me Here...~Story

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by story, Feb 19, 2003.

  1. story

    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blood relationships
    Don't really mean ****
    Because when it all comes down to it
    Family will jump ****
    And leave you hanging too
    Assuming they were honestly on your side
    In the first place

    Blodd may be thicker than water
    but the spirit is thicker than blood
    So hear me when I say
    Let the spirit inside you guide you
    Because when all else fails
    It'll always be beside you
    Friends fail you
    Family betrays you
    People...can only do so much
    Love yourself
    Trust yourself
    Don't believe the hype
    Ignore the lies
    No one is with you until the end of time
    But YOU...

    ~Story
    2/18/03
    11:00PM
     
  2. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sad but so true



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  3. story

    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah...

    Everyone is responsible for their own emotional well being.
     
  4. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very true here. Nice write story.
     
  5. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    right...right...aiight.

    let the river flow.
     
  6. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True Dat

    Words are borne, baby girl. 1poetsought :toast:
     
  7. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i've been meaning to check out your work story....
    i like this piece alot...'tis very true...
    'awareness to tha disadvantages in life can make bad times seem not too surprising'.....feel me?


    nice piece...1
     
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