Black Poetry : It's Getting Stronger

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by msluciousb, Dec 14, 2003.

  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's getting stronger, this emotion that I feel.
    It's getting stronger, need to know if you're for real.
    It's getting stronger , this need to see your smiling face.
    It's getting stronger, this desire to feel your warm embrace.
    It's getting stronger, this thought that you and I should be we.
    It's getting stronger, and passions once repressed need to be
    free.

    It's getting stronger , can't stop my mind from reeling.
    It's getting stronger, and I can't stop the feeling.
    It's getting stronger,
    and I can't help myself even if I wanted
    to.
    It's geting stronger, now I need to know
    what you really want
    to do.
    It's getting stronger, can you feel the beating of our hearts.
    Is this where it plateau's or is this where it starts.

    BJS(c)2003
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice i likes....
    i feel ya on dis...Angel
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so beautiful sister
    i feel the calmness in this flow
    very touching indeed
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I love the way this was written
    tyte scribe
     
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    ooooooooooweeeeeeeeeee some fiyah is burnin and its gettin hot hot hot huh?!? lol
     
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    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a strong poem indeed!!!
    GOD BLESS :coffee:
     
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    SisterGirl...such a powerful punch in that ending...
    I would say that a feeling like that...is just the beginning
    however...it is
    I just know I'm loving it!
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for reading!

    Thanks so much for going with me this year on this magnificent journey
    of self discovery and healing. It means so much that you care enough to say a word!

    Blessings On Your House! :peace: :thanks:
     
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