Black Poetry : It's Easier that Way...

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's easier that way
    for him not to see
    how strongly and purely my
    love is, in all its intensity
    It's easier that way...

    It's simpler for him
    to not know that his
    love flows drip by drip like Chinese
    torture, that's sort of how it is
    It's easier that way...

    It's not hard for him to ignore
    the spell he's put upon my mind
    he's put one hex of an incantation
    on me, leaving my thoughts in a bind
    And it's not difficult for him to forget
    as his spirit rests upon mine so deep,
    that we're able to make love to each other's
    minds before we fall off to sleep...

    So, I suppose, it's easier that way
    to put true feelings at bay
    he probably will never know
    just how much I love him so....
    It's easier that way....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well stated and sometime it's easier to know where he lay
    and the emotions of what is , it's easier for her to understand yet
    know he so love just afraid or too shy i guess this hit points never
    thought of ...flow on sis express....i like
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In this case, it's easier "thought"...than said
    this is tender and original, I enjoyed it.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Perhaps somehow she hasn't been able to convey how down to earth she is. Maybe he just can't imagine how there's nothing to be afraid of. Is it possible for love to speak for itself? Glad you liked this Rich, thank you brotha.
    I guess some expressions are more than a notion queent. Glad to know you enjoyed this sista, thank you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so true watz just maybe .......time will reveal it all i'm sure...
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another masterpiece!....Great work, Watz!
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Verry thoughtful sister Watz.. I like it and like Driz said ANOTHER MASTERPIECE! :look:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes Rich, time, and what is done during that time, will reveal it all, thanks again brotha.
    I am humbled by your response Bigdrizzle, thank you brotha.
    Thank you caramelpython, just like Bigdrizzle, you humble me as well poet.
     
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