Black Poetry : its crazy (no need to reply, just typin)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Dec 19, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lately Ive been feelin kinda ghost
    things that had me hype got me down the most
    I cant say im angry, naw its not that
    I just feel like sittin in a corner with the world at my back
    never feel like doin much anymore
    id rather just sit around n mope with my head to the floor
    I couldnt tell u why, I just feel madd empty
    I dont even budge when it comes to things that USED to tempt me
    my laugh n my persona isnt the same
    sh*t, I even get bored with writin and playin in my basketball games
    its just crazy...
     
  2. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I CAN RELATE TO THIS...
    SOMETIMES I FEEL LIKE
    THAT... WHEN I DO I PRAY
    AND READ MY BIBLE...
    HOPE YOU FEEL BETTER... :D
    GOD BLESS :toast:
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you write so tight, girl

    I feel this. Been in the apathetic place before myself. Vibin the "world at my back" line. It will pass eventually, sweetie. Hang in there and see what bubbles to the front of your consciousness. But hell, even when you're bored with your own writing, it sounds good. Much love to you.
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i know exactly what u mean girl.....this is a tyte piece...hope u feel better...
     
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    feelin ya on dis i too feel this way at times
     
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    this is tight sister...it seem like you made be tire...so relax and chill a moment...this is s a nice drop from your pen
    Peace
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    At times, I feel like this....... but you got to relax your soul and mind..... for me.... please do.... this was good.....
     
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