Black Poetry : Its Blessing coming...yall

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can you feel what I am going through?
    Do you know as I try and try
    The wall gets bigger and stronger
    The wind knocks me over
    The trees sing and the water wades
    The world begins to spin
    Likes it is the end…
    For I couldn’t see the light
    And the night took me in
    Brother I cant take no more
    Let me tell you….
    Sister my trails took a hold
    And began to mold me slowly
    Feeling like I am going insane
    A mind rush…a flow of problems
    And pains…the hurt I couldn’t bare
    No more it burns deep inside
    For the fire is rising
    And the darkness took…
    Need my trouble mind to rest
    My aching heart mended
    Yearning for peace
    Wishing for hope
    I hit the storm and
    Ran in to a hurricane this time and I am
    Coming through stronger then ever
    May take more time....But
    Giving my problems up
    For I can't do it alone
    Going down…
    Down by the riverside
    My alter call
    For I hear my blessing
    Tired of turning my back
    Walkin high with the light
    Wiping the tears from my eyes
    Feeling the joy
    And His power is taking over
    Dropping to my knees
    Feeling my blessings
    My tears fade and joy will prevail
    For the light takes the dark
    It’s a healing coming
    Brother I couldn’t take no more
    Sister do you hear me….
    I spoke in tongue
    And my body was covered
    For today is a brighter day
    And aint no one
    You hear me
    No one
    Gone take this joy away
    For its mind…..
    Down by the riverside
    Its a blessing coming...

    (C) 2004
    Poetry Praise
    Paradise
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The potency of this, yea, I hear you. Sometimes we have to force ourselves to be in the moment and see the blessings we do have, because reaching back to yesterday's grief is just too dang much to bear. Yes it's coming, and thank God it is. This was powerful.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ain't nobody gonn take your joy away...
    at this point and those words, I don't think anyone can. For surely, when you shine from the inside...nothing or no one can touch it.
    your words were well spoken and heard, much thanks
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just can't steal ya joy at all one love under GOD
    nice flow
     
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    1Greaterthan~I Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Testify!!!
    you've got something
    to praise him for
    this did my heart good
    to read :terrific:
     
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    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amen amen amen! :spin: It is a blessing comin:time: soon and very soon!....receive it! Nice work :terrific:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for the love and support
    Angel
     
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