Black Poetry : It's been a year

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Looking back over this year I must confess
    Everyday I fall more and more in love with you
    Everything about you down to your slighest caress.
    For it's all comes together in the knowing of you
    And every piece of the puzzle that is revealed
    It comes together to strengthen your appeal
    For you seem to be my absolute completion
    We are in sync almost to perfection
    Our future together shines bright
    With more good times to be had

    The place I want to be is close to you
    There’s ecstasy and peace in your embrace
    I know that I can cope with what life brings
    If it is your hand that I hold during this race
    You’re all I ever wanted, and much more
    After a year, I still look at you and get a thrill
    Our friendship is one of the best thing in my life
    I love you deeply, madly, and I always will
     
  2. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    I am so happy for you!

    I love to see Black people in love!

    And may it continue to only get deeper and more covenanted!

    This made me think of Stephanie Mills' "I Feel Good!"

    And you made me feel good just reading it!
     
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    Da more i reach down to da core
    i find myself loving you more
    for this made me feel real good
    to see you where ya heart stood
    after a full year friendship and beautiful cheer
    for every peep and every twist
    i see deep into the lioness
    that makes me say bless da one
    for tomorrow comes more sun

    This piece was so warm fuzzy and sweet i couldn't help myself
    love the beauty of it and how it made me smile wow u go gurl !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was such an endearing, heart filled piece. How lovely, poetess.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i feel the same way too lol

    nah you KNOW I'm feeling the love here girl

    and you KNOW i'm not mad at cha

    get YOURS

    peace
     
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    lol...i agree with dss
    beautiful prose...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    the timing of this

    flow'd so beautifully..

    nice vibe no doubt
     
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    im always a fan of yours sister asimplepoet :)
    This was soft sweet and so fitting to such a beautiful thing like
    Black Love
    Much props poetess :read: :)
     
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