Black Poetry : Its been a while

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  1. quest

    quest Active Member MEMBER

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    Its been a while since i have been on but i'm not gone so here is a little something. i hope the fam enjoys it. its old but i like it.



    What’s up with that thing you do?
    The way you move—
    The way you look—
    The whole appearance of you has left me in a state of shock
    Do you even know this effect you have on me.

    Cherishing everything about you
    From the center of your thoughts to the ends of your ideas
    Your joy, pain, fears, and tears
    The things you do for me subconsciously to help me better understand
    you
    And your ways, I have no problem waiting because patience pays.

    Remember those days when just a kiss would be so much more than what it
    is
    or was
    Is it really over between us?
    Does it have to stop, is it really a must?
    **** I trip too much.

    Maybe I need to move on and just forget everything
    Even though it’s so hard for me to let go—
    Of that delicious scent, harmonizing voice, rose pedal skin
    And all of that would bring a hypnotizing sound with just a blow of the
    wind
    It still amazes me how well you blend with nature.

    Maybe that is why they call you mother—
    Because you care so much—
    You say it’s not the end but it hurts when you say I rather have you as
    a
    friend
    **** I trip too much.

    I mean its cool and all with the friend thing but give me a chance
    I have so much to offer, so much to bring to our undeveloped
    relationship
    If it never develops it was never meant to be
    And if you get a homeboy I have no problem being number 3
    As long as I am still a part of your life.

    Just know that in my heart you are my queen, my light, my wife.

    quest (ache el)
     
  2. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Back Poet!
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Quest!

    Nice read!!! You haven't lost a thing bro!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    quest Active Member MEMBER

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    Bishop, GQ

    preciate the love and i'll be back with some more...make sure you let everyone know that the quest continues.

    quest ( ache el )


    greatmindsgreatworkgreatpeoplegreatpoetry
     
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