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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Pharaoh Jahil, Sep 6, 2003.

  1. Pharaoh Jahil

    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's been a while since we spoke
    Since we exchange our words of poetry
    expressing love, romance, art, life, death, happiness, and saddness..
    I sit and reminise to myself about the simple love we had
    Wondering what happen?
    Missing the beautiful conversations we exchange towards each other...

    Has the simple love between us came to an end?
    Was our love destined to come to this?
    Who knows, the simpleness of our love could have grew into something serious....
    The few moments I spent with you was so vivid
    In my eyes you are that special somebody
    and I will never forget the woman I once knew

    With hopes that someday you will be the one,
    I plant my seeds with, watching them grow together
    It all becomes a shattered dream
    I guess that's just my fault for being a dreamer
    But if I could make those dreams of heaven,
    With you become a minute of reality
    I will cherish that moment to the fullest
    I will forever remember and embrace it...

    If you have found someone else,
    who makes you happy and fulfill your every need
    than be with him..
    As long as he puts a smile on your face
    I will forever be happy for you....
    I understand....

    If it is meant for us to be together,
    than fate shall take its' course..
    If it isn't so, than Good Bye Love
    May Peace & Blessings be with you!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u said it all poetically and it was felt
    tyte scribe
     
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    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW
    what an emotional peace (snaps).. you got me ....wanting you to GET THAT LOVE.... I can feel the bittersweetness of this situation...
    Flow on......
     
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    :bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown:

    tears in my eyes make it difficult
    to express, you pulled the heartstrings
    on that one! poignant, and so bittersweet I can
    taste it

    Like SUNkissed, I really hope you get
    that love
     
  5. Pharaoh Jahil

    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Jah bless yall.
     
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