Black Poetry : It's been a while...it's so go to feel you again

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Dec 6, 2002.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    been missing you
    been wrecklessly busy
    beyond the boundaries of my being
    I guess you could say I was losing my
    mind...time had me cornered
    threatening me with sweeping
    hands and striking chords
    that struck every minute...
    It's amazing that I'm still here...

    I haven't been able to stroke you
    stroke with you ...have that menage tois
    with our other friend in quite sometime.
    I've been neglecting you for too long
    now I'm ready to lick you again and begin
    making love, joy, harmony, and happy with
    you 'til each shard of light exits the world
    and I sit in the dark...then all i'll be able to do
    is part my thoughts and grease in between
    the lines so our copulation is comfortable

    been missing you so long that another child
    I knew was murdered...
    nephew **** near died and I wanted to strike
    my own mortal blow and more kids
    are on the verge to fight another man's
    war again...for freedom...of what?

    I've heard you calling my name
    beyond the cranial chaos and confusion
    the wind of the springtime / the fall of September /
    when she got up she smiled at me
    and dropped so many earthtone hues around my feet
    I was born again
    your hands lifted me to the heavens
    and named me "poet"
    you told me I had to be reborn
    just to live before my death

    thank you...

    my friend...my pen...

    I've been missing you for a while
    and it's so good to feel you again

    (c)2002 blakverb "off da top thinkin"
     
  2. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    garrison.


    bravo!! :)

    this was unique-ly you & i'm feelin' you on this
    peace in more ways than you probably even
    know. i'm glad you got your "thang" back...
    cause it's good to read you again... & again... & :D

    itsallpeace.

    elayne.
     
  3. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blak man is back!!!
     
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    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "NICE"

    "Ah Yeah"
    Nice flow my brother and I can say I am really feeling ya pen....

    Be blessed

    :toast:
     
  5. Monalisa

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    Guess we all know this feeling!

    I can testify to "missing my pen...my friend" most recently also and how GOOD it was when we found one another again...Made me wonder why I took so long to be healed:heart:
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dope piece
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tappin loudly on the mental!

    We hear you knocking...Come on in!
    Blessings, glad to see you, I too have been on a self imposed exile/hiatus...It is the sign of a true artist when he knows that rest is not "Retreat" or "Defeat".
    Blessings on Ya House!
     
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    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm loving this piece. i can't wait to see what else you post now that you're feeling your pen again.
     
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    Aminata Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    know the feelin blak...

    just thankful that you're back!

    It's wonderful to feel your stroke...again;)

    Ahhh me nah tah:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Blk dis was most def da vibe of true love
    a romantic bliss u & da pen doing it again!
    glad u found da nitch to scribe dis one out...
     
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