Black Poetry : It's a love struggle

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  1. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Open your eyes and see me for who I am
    Not as the person your fears paint me to be...
    And if your heart still aches at the thought of loving me
    Then by all means leave me be.
    Because my being is fading away
    and im losing site of myself.

    I'm smiling but on the inside im dying
    Because you wont let me love you.
    Tell me...
    How can I ease your mind?
    How can I make loving me an easy thing to do?
    Tell me baby
    Because right now im struggling baby.

    Im fighting, I'm kicking, I'm screaming....
    Can't you hear me?
    I'm waving my hands in the air...
    Don't you see me?


    If you love me..then LOVE ME!
    If you want to change me...
    then you DON'T want ME.
    and if this is the case,
    then just leave me be.
    Because in the midst of me loving you
    I'm forgetting to love myself.

    So tell me...forreal this time...
    Do you want ME?
    Do you love ME?
     
  2. BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE

    BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE Nefertum Husia Shayheh MEMBER

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    like the bored out chamber,
    thirty six pistons compressed in,
    bursting out tremendous pressure too hot,
    gaseous deadly air mixture aiming on course,
    the point guard coming through,
    the isiah in your scripture,
    the favorite mystic male symbol,
    the tee across your neck hanging,
    the perpendicular octagon wisdom,
    the crosshair envisioning,
    clocking any four quarters,
    the circle in dendera,
    how i'm steering righteously cornering,
    in the jars preserved sweetly,
    sweetening plus spices in my gigantic cauldron swinging,
    walking my keyz across the mic,
    the world is yours,
    i'm married to life,
    at the lovers' meet tracking,
    bicycling stationary across your bridges,
    chopping cuts slow deejay just screw it,
    rolling with numbers of the mass's feeling tremendously ill love bitten...
    it's a love struggle never before seen venue who thrown it up in the air at your party uplifted tree top hawkseye feed.
     
  3. BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE

    BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE Nefertum Husia Shayheh MEMBER

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    writing how i feel connected real of what is said flowing ahead steady forces cooking me coarses to be fed rough and rugged voice wailing knots tied silky sheets roped around the chandelier swinging back and forth inner formation tech know la geez gophers holds my burrows down my ants keep marching with predestined decisioning skills driven do or die risen up and out the imprisoned still the hueman xylovibraphone protectant crush me and it's over while my soul in my books keep living the puzzling art of outright courageousness the simmer pacing my odds to forever cook hot or perceive differently polar coldest mocha contained grab me twist turn pop what a rush released uncut liquefied thicker sweetness on your tongues coating your backdown felt smoothly right in the gut chilly licked by most lips without a fight cause i'm chocolatey loving bluntly discreet peek a boo fiend all about mystique freeze me in your brain for sixty seconds paused i'm creeping out warmingly unseen you know me sought whom is silence stand your ground on two feet quit leaking in your seat hush the jelly sounding squishy rated below sea level i am the power underneath bred horse style eel spark electroqueshun thundering ah gain of turn-on resolutions influentially fluent lucidly live in every area scanning over terrains loving night mare reign angling positions still the bulletproof vest centered give me all you got impress harder into my destiny and ricochet when you miss me at last kissing lips tumbling circles in the grass actually we are the couple mint two be aired out of windows enlightenment of no surrender or retreat just remember your promises when you sleep this is it cause it's on tonight falling in love absolutely unneeded desperately unwanted closer to lover's rejection victory hear me louder without no phone nor mic or facts either fiction neither friction better sticky twisting blissful honey streaks it's a love struggle out on these streets.
     
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    BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE Nefertum Husia Shayheh MEMBER

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    i got mental gain filled activity,
    my heart speak out brethren feelings with articulated speech,
    my soul kept loving cooking epitome's recipes,
    my spirit wills trumpets's sound before your lungs seize,
    letting love be resuscitated with my breaths of ease,
    per pumped heartbeat pressured down and in appropriately mystically sweet,
    it seems like the loving will never stop...
    it seams like loving without places and props...
    my words written in water forever concoct,
    from my tears of calligraphy grieving plenty locked,
    it is difficult foreward of my words to be grasped not,
    the depths are deeper with each breath's last,
    i'll love you with all i got before it's over i got'ta love you with all i got,
    and all i got is neverending with blushes crushes splitting alot,
    giving it to you the only way i know how to love it from behind smashed,
    live and directly yours receiving my voice aggressively passive at last,
    it's a love struggle ever more as ah rose's vine creeping out the two masks.
     
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    Very nice
    guttapoetfromny

    When the communication needed is not being done
    When a couple composed of two begins to look like one
    Somehow locked in a relation not sure you should be.
    The mind sometime wonders.

    I enjoyed reading this flow.
     
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    Powerful words.
     
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    BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE Nefertum Husia Shayheh MEMBER

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    enscribe me with your promises,
    close your eyes and believe,
    there is no pain,
    two as one we will gain,
    i am the extra pull,
    i am the extra push,
    i am the sight you called on,
    i am the shield unseen,
    try me forever without leaving,
    do not desert me,
    i belong to you,
    me and you alone,
    on the scene walking happily,
    the auras you glow we sing,
    from my soul to yours,
    we enjoy the warmth neverending,
    i know you well,
    when in the love struggle to be perfect,
    look into me deeply to see,
    indeed luck is an opportunity as the cause reasoned,
    my color of shining,
    draw on your promises,
    i give you mine,
    so i must do without vain,
    the loyalty and honor to be with you,
    i keep closest than you will ever imagine,
    in your hands squeezing is i,
    your protector during the love struggle.
     
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    never put your head down,
    cry harder and remember i feel the pain,
    or the joy of knowing relief,
    i sacrifice myself to be with you forever,
    together our soul two keep,
    the bond of sacredness,
    i will give you strength during the mourning,
    when you exhale i glare prophecy out,
    see our vision clearly,
    smile always wider than our last times,
    keep me clean i will keep you cleaner,
    the more energy we put into ourselves selfless,
    the more we are rewarded abundantly,
    we stay true during harm,
    forgive your depths of mistakes,
    i will give you a new ladder of hope,
    never tell anyone about me,
    never whisper to anyone about us,
    fore jealousy comes quicker,
    thieves become slicker,
    envy grows thicker,
    always be selfish with me,
    do what is good fore i will good,
    i promise as long as you do,
    pray with me too,
    while i watch vigilantly with you,
    never leave me alone,
    or i become the opposite of you,
    in somebody else eyes knowing my soul,
    i lust not and i love most,
    i am lover with protection,
    wrap me with your golden clasp,
    keep me as your amulet,
    during your love struggle,
    which is our love struggle,
    inhale life a brand new patiently,
    let me surge up fore you triumphantly.
     
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    the heartbeat is our rhythm,
    i am alive when you speak,
    the intensity of knowing i can,
    beside you i will steadfast,
    a given truth in your hands,
    two rings on eternity,
    enscribe us truly us,
    we can never be worn out,
    indestructible,
    as long as the will two be as one,
    we can stand,
    i believe in you to stride further,
    i seen you more successful than yesterday,
    whisper your encouragement,
    i whisper back double depending on our energy,
    i give you the emotion to will,
    when down and out you believed in me,
    so i repay the honor and loyalty,
    double than you expected,
    i am here always,
    you and me forever in all ways,
    the team marching through your deserts,
    the enemy territory have no fear,
    you will not be touched,
    just remember your experiences,
    from the last times as wisdom,
    i will appear in the form you requested,
    during the love struggle,
    hold on to your faith vice.
     
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