Quiet Poetry Lounge : It's a God thing

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What stands here as me
    Could never ever be
    If there wasn't a HE

    HE did what I on my own could not ever do
    And even today He's still seeing me through
    A work in progress is what you see before you

    You see it's a God thing

    Something I can't even begin to explain
    You just can't get it till He eases your pain
    Or till He brings you out the storm and rain

    You can't completely understand my praise
    Or why the tears flow and my hand raise
    Or why my lifestyle is more than a phase

    Because it's a God thing

    When I was beneath the world's care
    He took time to do more than just be there
    His grace and mercy it what's got me here

    I dont's know what else I could begin to say
    About a man who's presence changes the day
    Who with one touch changed my very way

    All I can say its a God thing
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    iIf something Can amount More that Beautiful...
    Than this was it Sis
    Flow on
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely u painted it to perfection
     
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    I felt such joy within your words of praise. Yes, what a change the touch of God's hands can make. So well expressed.
     
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    Powerful Piece...
    On a two-man ride of a horse, one must ride behind "ain't God good?"
     
  6. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am Coming Oce again to Praise this
    Because...
    It's A GOD Thing Sis
     
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