Black Poetry : Its 3am

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by misty, Jul 12, 2002.

  1. misty

    misty Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its 3:00am and i can't sleep
    its too hot in this room
    or is it just me
    you're on my mind
    can i have an hour of your time
    can i meet you at the door in my birthday suit
    no hellos required
    i need to feel your lips on mine
    your tongue in my mouth
    i shiver with anticipation
    man i love to kiss you
    its been awhile
    haven't felt your body on mine
    haven't felt your arms holding me
    haven't touched your hand
    haven't laid with you and daydreamed
    can i have an hour of your time
    can you satisfy this yearning i have for you
    you know what to do
    the question is will you ??
    Missing you


    :)
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    misty.


    mmm hmm... i can dig it my sistah!!
    (wit 2 **** shovels!! :lol: )

    alwayspeace.

    elayne.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yearning & burning
    yeah! u can have my tyme
    coz it was u on my mind
    just dis moment
    i felt ur heart
    now can we start to unwined
    as we dine under da fireplace
    as i trace da smiles of yo face
    sweet whispers and tender kiss
    ahhh! get ready for dis
    da bliss of comfort
    a gentle caress
    light rubs and kisses of ya chest
    tongue lashing !!!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    an hour may not be long enuff.:)

    NICELY done.
     
  5. smilin_dwarf

    smilin_dwarf Active Member MEMBER

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    Really enjoyed your poem. It forced me to think of my long time, long-missing friend, Fuzzy. Thank you for sharing. Dwarf
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    misty misty misty

    i know what you talkin bout for real and like layne said diggin with two shovels :D



    One
     
  7. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Whoodie-Hoo!....I hear you and I feel ya on this one, Sistah! :toast:


    And that "meet him at the door" part....well, let's just say, THAT line brought back some memories! :em2300:


    I enjoyed the read!.....Good one!





    And :birthday: