Black Poetry : it'll all get greater later...(reply to Dream Weaver's "Everything is Fine")

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pain is weakness leaving the body



    sometimes to part is the best thing--
    being alone in my thoughts of you that--
    perspicate

    without preturbation
    ache
    like emotional migraines
    that no excedrin could
    mitigate

    reaching for an invisible you has--
    become my existence--
    everyday
    of every breath
    in every though

    u
    overtake the sentences
    or lack thereof that
    i scribe into cyberspace

    i don't hurt

    i
    pain.

    yet on the other hand...
    i survive.

    I learn.
    I learn to live...

    without you.

    lost in obfuscation.

    (o b f (lost) u s c a t i o n)

    see...i'm lost im obfuscation.
     
  2. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooooooooo!!!!!!!!!

    THIS IS HOT TO DEATH SON!!!!!

    YO.....IM SO GLAD IM BACK.....
    MAN......

    I CAME JUST IN TIME.......

    **DUMBFOUNDED**
    :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:
     
  3. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes parting is the best, sometimes, it drives one to insanity. What do you think?


    I'm just sayin...
    :eek:
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad that you all felt the writing!

    SGS-- I'm glad that you are back too!

    Cindy-- I thank you for you insight!

    Dream Weaver-- I felt your point in "everything is fine" i had to piggyback from it. thanks for the read.

    sean.appreciated
     
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