Black Poetry : itch

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    running my hands down my arms
    tracing my viens with the tips
    of expression
    clenching my fist
    trying to relieve agreession
    emotional build up
    sends me shakes
    addicted to this relief
    no matter what it takes
    i got an itch
    cant put it down until the end
    fix after fix
    dollar after dollar i spend
    countless hours i bend
    moving mountains of lost nerves
    crossing oceans of tears
    expressing my voids
    guilts
    pains
    ima addict
    i got an itch for this ish
    that wont supend
    some say i need rahab
    cuz ima kill me or them
    they tried to send me,but i said no
    releasing is my only way to cope
    and its been a while
    since i had a fix
    since i had some quality ish
    heard some
    wrote some
    quality ish
    only had time and the dollar
    for a quick spit
    but now im focused
    ready
    needing to scratch this itch
    so someone please pass me a pen!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Taketh thou ink
    spill at will
    mix and match
    verse it wit thrill

    use my pen
    from deep within
    mark ya spot
    drop it red hot
    as u ink ya expression
    cross da emotions
    and scratch dat itch
    or come here as i tame it 4 u !
     
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    Yes, it's that itch that we just have to scratch. Loved the creative way you expressed that urge, poetess.
     
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    Very nice...very nice.....
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    ah ha

    you got me poet

    then the last line was such a great climax

    this was one real piece here poet

    glad i read it

    peace
     
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