Black Poetry : itch

[daroc]

running my hands down my arms
tracing my viens with the tips
of expression
clenching my fist
trying to relieve agreession
emotional build up
sends me shakes
addicted to this relief
no matter what it takes
i got an itch
cant put it down until the end
fix after fix
dollar after dollar i spend
countless hours i bend
moving mountains of lost nerves
crossing oceans of tears
expressing my voids
guilts
pains
ima addict
i got an itch for this ish
that wont supend
some say i need rahab
cuz ima kill me or them
they tried to send me,but i said no
releasing is my only way to cope
and its been a while
since i had a fix
since i had some quality ish
heard some
wrote some
quality ish
only had time and the dollar
for a quick spit
but now im focused
ready
needing to scratch this itch
so someone please pass me a pen!!

 

[$$RICH$$]

Taketh thou ink
spill at will
mix and match
verse it wit thrill

use my pen
from deep within
mark ya spot
drop it red hot
as u ink ya expression
cross da emotions
and scratch dat itch
or come here as i tame it 4 u !

 

[watzinaname]

Yes, it's that itch that we just have to scratch. Loved the creative way you expressed that urge, poetess.

 

[4EVERLUV]

Very nice...very nice.....

 

[Da Street So'ja]

ah ha

running my hands down my arms
tracing my viens with the tips
of expression
clenching my fist
trying to relieve agreession
emotional build up
sends me shakes
addicted to this relief
no matter what it takes
i got an itch
cant put it down until the end
fix after fix
dollar after dollar i spend
countless hours i bend
moving mountains of lost nerves
crossing oceans of tears
expressing my voids
guilts
pains
ima addict
i got an itch for this ish
that wont supend
some say i need rahab
cuz ima kill me or them
they tried to send me,but i said no
releasing is my only way to cope
and its been a while
since i had a fix
since i had some quality ish
heard some
wrote some
quality ish
only had time and the dollar
for a quick spit
but now im focused
ready
needing to scratch this itch
so someone please pass me a pen!!

you got me poet

then the last line was such a great climax

this was one real piece here poet

glad i read it

peace