Black Poetry : "IT"

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "IT" made the sun seem brighter,
    and drew me in closer like a moth to a lighter.

    "IT" made the moon shine with a smile,
    and the stars twinkle like the eyes of a child.

    "IT" makes a shower refreshing,
    and the soapsuds seem to be caressing.

    Places where you've yearned to be touched,
    **** "IT" seems to have me in it's clutch.

    You see "IT" never seems to travel alone when "IT" comes around,
    but you won't see or hear "IT" coming fot "IT" plays the background.

    "IT's" grip is tight as a python when "IT" starts to squeeze,
    Yes, "IT" can build a life long link overseas.

    But "IT" has a nasty backhand when "IT's" abused,
    and can tear down a soul from within wearing some big asz shoes.

    "IT's" the sweetest scent you ever smelled,
    and the loudest statement ever yelled.

    "IT's" thoughts with a lost of words,
    "IT's" poetry written but never read or heard.

    "IT's" a tear full of emotion within an ocean,
    "IT's" a prayer at the alter full of devotion.

    "IT" allowed Aaliyah to rock the boat
    and made Left Eye crazy sexy cool
    "IT" made that special teacher try harder to teach in school.

    "IT" made Tupac, Biggie and 911 not small,
    When the two towers crashed while a plane,
    smashed into the Pentagon's Hall.

    "IT's" often mistaken for "IT's" twin,
    that goes by the name of Lust!

    But "IT's" true name is LOVE and in love we trust!

    Caramelpython
    11/24/2002
    (c) Jagged-Mills Productions Inc
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice drop brutha like dis here
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice write..
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. watzinaname

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    Like the creative way you put this together.
     
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    Very original style
    love the concept
    and yes..."IT" is all of
    these things and more...
    powerful ending...
    scribe on...poet!
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ thanks my brother glad you enjoyed it..lol

    mzblkangel thanks alot... im reading lady.

    watzinaname.. yes i was looking for a different approach at the time thanks alot.

    angelicsage Im back lady..LOL I guess vacation time is over thanks 4 the love and support always.