Black Poetry : It Won't let Up...

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  1. MzBlkAngel

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    Take me Lord Jesus
    Hold my hand and see me through
    For my love is on high
    And the pain is bring me down
    I need you Lord Jesus today
    My shelter has left
    And the wind is blowing
    For I can’t hold myself today
    Lost in the storm once more
    As each moment threatens me
    And I lose grip of your will
    My peace have been removed
    How do I get through this wind?
    It pushes me back when I see the light
    The clouds build around closing me in
    And the storm gets heavier
    Take me Lord Jesus
    Hold my hand for I am lost once more
    Today it wont let up

    (C) 2005 Poetry Praise
    Untitled Prayer
    Poetry by an Angel
     
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    Safe in the Creators arms, is where all burdens are released!

    Never let up Sis!
    Emotionally felt!
     
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    I can feel your pain and distress
    sending out to me a s.o.s
    Got me siting and thinking
    How did I get into this mess.
    After all life is but a test!

    Thanks for sharing this piece Angel
    Continue to let your lyte shine bright.
     
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    your prayers heard he holds u closer
    then the body knows awesome sista just awesome
    the power of GOD's love
     
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    Seek the Lord and His strength,
    Seek His presence continually!

    1 Chronicles 16.11
     
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    thank you all for the support and love here

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    HE never burdens U with more than U can bare.

    Humility & peace will be yours if U just hang in there.

    Many blessings be upon U, sister.

    Peace.
     
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    Suck it up. All you have to do is sip some of this conliqa. Everything'll be aiight. :D

    Nice piece. If you publish a book like this, people will think you're about to commit suicide. :lol:

    Seriously, it's a very nice piece. When the chips are down and you FEEL or THINK you have nowhere else to turn, turn to the LORD.

    :thanks: for reminding the Fam of whom to seek when in despair.

    :toast:
     
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    RE: HI

    good-afternoon MzBlkAngel,


    decided to check out a few poems today...

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    Take me Lord Jesus
    Hold my hand and see me through
    For my love is on high
    And the pain is bring me down
    I need you Lord Jesus today
    My shelter has left
    And the wind is blowing
    For I can’t hold myself today
    Lost in the storm once more
    As each moment threatens me
    And I lose grip of your will
    My peace have been removed
    How do I get through this wind?
    It pushes me back when I see the light
    The clouds build around closing me in
    And the storm gets heavier
    Take me Lord Jesus
    Hold my hand for I am lost once more
    Today it wont let up
    ==
    ==


    heart felt verses as i for one is glad to know that you are getting intouch with thyself spiritually... what you wrote has been experienced by many as indeed one constantly needs to nuture thy relationship with the man above... i say continue to serve him fully as this spiritual piece, speaks for itself... keep the ink flowing my poetic sister...


    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
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    This was powerful.....just the whole vibe to it made me feel ur desperation so much...nice peice mzblack...its a pleasure to read another peice from u...u must definately have an archive here of nuthin but jems...
     
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