Black Poetry : It Was YOU (satin sheets part 3)

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    paradise has a new name
    it was"YOU"
    your words stuck to my mind
    puttin up a sign of
    DO-NOT-DISTURB
    on my mental
    so that i can
    FEEL...U......

    pinpoint the constellations
    that formed in your skin
    and sunk....IN.....your...
    gravitational pull,
    to your eternity.

    till my tears of nothingness
    creeped into the depts of
    my pillows so that i can




    .............submerge.............
    from this nothingness that
    was my pain untill
    u strung my name among
    the stars
    and had saturns rings
    wrapped around ur finger
    as fine lenin

    i........was......trapped......
    in Genesis's dawn
    and omega's rain wouldn't fall

    because u were
    fresh....
    because
    love had a new name
    it was "YOU" :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'my did i do dat !!!!....................lol

    this was real cute and smooth like how the essence was captured
    please continue he must feel good to know dis here...wow!!
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: thanks rich, :kiss:
     
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    :roll:
    :rolling:

    :tongue:
    :jumping:





    :lol:




    :wave: :toast: :love: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:
     
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    oh my what a lucky guy
     
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    Girl..........you are so baaaaaaaaaaad!

    I mean that as in Hot! Good! and All that!
     
  7. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall glad u feelin me
    much love,
    -story
     
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    story that is great! u just keep getting better and better, girl. :)
     
  9. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks gempis
    much love,
    -story
     
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    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I LOVE reading you...
    (snaps)
    you have a unique way with words...
    I like your flava!!
    GREAT PEACE!
     
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