Quiet Poetry Lounge : It was sweet

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by kente417mojo, Jul 1, 2004.

  1. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It was sweet and gentle
    when you said it
    like your kisses
    on my cheek
    like appreciation times three
    I felt it
    not at the moment
    but seconds after
    in the mist of all our laughter
    you slipped it in
    looking into your eyes
    with surprise
    my mind rewinds
    to make certain they were the same words
    that scroll through my heart
    when I think of you
    and they were
    thank GOD they were
    because I love you too :heart:
     
  2. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwww,......that really is sweet. That's precious, Kente. :toast:
     
  3. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks beautiful. I appreciate the kind words always. :luvv: I love your name also. Sounds so peaceful.
     
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    I agree with jazzy, this was sweet, the way you posed this was so lovely and real.
     
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    oh yes :)
    liking your poem
    making me smile :)
    nice flow
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Very warm poem...I can relate to the sound of this. Here's to :toast: the both of you, and may your love grow stronger with time.
     
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    likes ya poem very warm and sweet
    thanks for sharing.....Angel
     
  8. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queen, Angel, Blue and Watz...thank you very much for the comments. That's one of the sexiest things to hear from a woman when it's actually true. I had to write about that. Glad you enjoyed it. :peace:
     
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    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can always tell when a poem is tight...
    cause i wish i wrote it...
    this was one of those...appreciation all around
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you 7thPoet, glad you enjoyed this poem and I hope you enjoy future ones also. Much Love. :peace:
     
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