Black Poetry : It was just infatuation

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  1. Virgil

    Virgil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Inspired by "Just My Imagination" by The Temptations

    Whenever she’s present, I always tend to catch her face.
    We attract one another when we’re in the same place.
    I’m suddenly bombarded with visions of her as mine.
    I’ve never seen a girl come close to looking that fine.
    But it was just infatuation, running away with me.
    It was just infatuation, running away with me.

    We’re always in love and we overcome our differences.
    Although some think we should come to our senses.
    Being with someone else is not for me.
    And I can understand her purity.
    I’ll protect her from all harms, as I hold her in my arms.
    But it was just infatuation, running away with me.
    It’s still just infatuation, running away with me.

    I still wonder why I can’t speak and say just one word to her.
    I know if I wait too long, she’ll find love with another.
    She’s an angel to me.
    She has amazing beauty of the likes I know I’ll never see.
    But in reality,
    She never belonged with me.
    It was just infatuation, running away with me.
    Although I never met her,
    I’ll never forget her.
    But it was just infatuation.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GOING THROUGH YA MIND
    DIS WAS AWESOME INFATUATION....WOW
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

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    wonderfully written...
     
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    you magic appear in this piece...well done

    Shaela
     
  5. HODEE

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    Very Nice.. Virgil
     
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    oh i like this nice writtin
     
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    I like this alot. Majestically wonderful! :heart:
     
  8. Virgil

    Virgil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks to HODEE, Envy, mzblkangel, LovelyGoldenOne ,$$RICH$$, and PoeticShae for replying to this piece.
     
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    I like your style of writing, it is tight!
     
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    ahhhhhhh
    yes this was nice
    nice scribe
    Peace
     
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