Black Poetry : it was her . . .

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  1. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It started out as just words,
    but grew into sentences,
    consecutive life sentences. . .
    imprisoned by the images
    that body language spoke,
    stroked by her essence,
    can’t recall the time
    only moments held the lessons,
    and I could see within her pupils,
    there was something I could teacher . . .
    A star in my eyes,
    but I knew that I could reach her,
    without stretched limps,
    we outstretched the hymns(hims)
    that sang the songs of heartbreak,
    in carelessly contrived concertos,
    the music that we made amplified
    as we compared souls,
    like the pull of opposite poles,
    we demonstrate innate polarity,
    within moments of our meeting
    I knew I’d ask this jewel to marry me.
    Although in a not so distant future,
    it was my destiny to woo her . . .
    Renew her,
    cause my path in life passed through her.
    No sooner than later passed
    I saw the creator’s laugh
    embodied in tapered glass
    reflecting my ladies crass
    way of relating math
    to that of potential halves
    by way of parental stabs . . .
    Can’t recall how many adults, three?
    caught with two Jamaican chicks,
    so I guess its adultery.
    Strong brotha with a flesh weakness,
    so imagine how much strength it took to complete this.
     
  2. skrybble7

    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was diggin' this cleverly composed piece.
    One love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done poet i like this one.
     
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    it was her all alone
    resist the urges dont bury the bone

    let the love you feel for her continue always
    let the love you discover to be always on display
    show the others chicks they wont have you in dismay
    because your sunshine put out some powerful rays

    as her rays of light shed new meaning
    you felt this one isnt scheming

    having some other hidden agenda on mind
    Love i tell ya love do really takes time
    and soon in our Golden Years you'll be able to press rewind

    and think about how you made the right choice
    and how you both speak with one voice

    and how even when you both walk people notice a glo
    and causing others' to stare and wanting to know

    if they to will discover love like ya'll
    i know baby gurl will pick you up and wont let you fall

    because she's the wind when it get's hot
    she's the moon for ya poet you only have shot

    to make it right
    dont take a byte

    of the forbidden fruit
    dont be like the Pirates of the Carribean Sea and take the loot

    say no
    let the urges go
    cause you know

    that

    It was her...................


    enjoyed the flo poet sometimes i like flowing off ones' so i hope ya dont mind.
    :smooch: :welldone:
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The turn this piece took was surprising. If the admiration of her was that strong, but the lust was stronger, I guess it did take a lot to pen those words. Well constructed piece poet.
     
  6. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very good & the ending Great! Write On! Write On!
     
  7. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i guess a lot of strenght ..lol
    yo i was feelin dis drop very nice
    luved yo flo and luv the piece
    so flo on wit nonstop
    frum yo sistah G.A



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