Black Poetry : it used to be

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Sep 9, 2003.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...use to feel miles away from love
    until God brought you within my soul's reach
    like the wind
    through the summer...

    ...use to think l would rather be alone
    l ended my quest..
    had to be God b/c at my best
    l would not have found your throne my queen

    you are the difference in my life and this l mean
    from the day the dove was released from my inner confinement...and never returned,
    l opened my heart to your sunshine.

    ...it used to be
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww, this is so touching and so beautiful. I am very happy for you. :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    once again brutha u have took it to the place where love
    should be this was very beautiful and so sweet to a woman
    heart.
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was just so beautiful...so sweet. thanks for opening your heart and sharing that with us.
     
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    the profundity of your thoughts on love
    are by far wisdom…..I hear the voice
    of destiny, inevitability and gods will be done
    in this piece……it is amazing when someone
    wonderful is placed in your life, divinely…you are blessed

    peace
     
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    like a cool
    breeze
    your words
    flow
    so gently
    openly
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so beautiful.... ur words, the emotion... just leaves me speechless....
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "from the day the dove was released from my inner confinement...and never returned, "

    my brotha u have like sista angelic said
    such a profound voice on love
    life
    and the result
    is poetry at its best
    thank u :)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwww this was so sweet..
    i like it alot
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwww this was so sweet..
    i like it alot
     
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