Black Poetry : It takes time

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, Mar 23, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i swayed to take in your looks
    the selected measure of you glows
    with incandesence
    like magic dust
    makin constellations over books
    makin you more sacred - the time it took
    awaitin the slow looks
    touches, kisses mind's mating
    excitement anticipating holding you close
    in places
    feeling you naked
    unrestricted
    subtle touches
    bold grips upon riches
    -the time it took
    a preparation for this instance
    my young love luuhrrved(loved) 2
    watch your dimensions
    physical
    shaping in the distance
    querying which directions anatomically
    to first touch and pay attention
    eating you up
    my eyes would rush
    to magazines where the breast
    and clitoris fill the pages seams
    my eyes beamed
    soaking in 2-dimensionally
    the way you worked
    so many curse you
    still i seen deepa
    like all the clubs where we met
    diva'd up or shake yo booty at
    left my physical shooken
    and to truly be true to myself
    i gazed deeper
    you uniquer than fly words
    beautiful like the earth majestic
    -the time it took
    for me to want to build with you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    in time sweet release come
    and building is formed within
    by heart & soul this was tyte
     
  3. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no doubt $$RICH$$
    learnin as tha world turns

    one
    /antar
     
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    indeed indeed i too sit in the turn of it as it go round
    flow on
     
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    Dont think I've forgotten that you said you would bless us on the mic in chat my brotha ;) this was niiiiiiiceee :D
     
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    poeticly_yours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was really nice. keep flowing :wave:
     
  7. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    triniti424- ay, thanks, glad that you like that. maybe i can see if i can get on chat today... these school PCs be so restricted, you know

    poeticly_yours- thanks for the props and motivation

    onelove,
    /antar
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes this..
    tight flow
    diggin this
    flow on...
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Preparation for this instance. So true so true. Keep flowing.
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Two thumbs up
    I love the imagery in your writing
    This is a tyte piece
    Flow on...PLEASE FLOW ON



    Peace and love
     
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