Black Poetry : it started out slow

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by justbnme03, Jul 7, 2003.

  1. justbnme03

    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It started out slow
    Simple whats up or hello
    Then the calls late at night
    Talking bout how he can make me feel o so right
    Talk is cheap is what I learned to speak
    So I gave the invite to come thru anytime this week
    Friday nite the doorbell rang
    Not expecting any visitors, the face thru the hole made my heart sang
    Dressed casually and looking fine as ever
    Made me shiver and quiver
    He said whats up I said hello
    Next thing I know my back is to the do’
    As we stare each other down, unspoken words are all around
    Eyes say I want you and mine respond take me now
    And I know that he has come to do what he has longed to
    And im cool with that, time for him to put into action all of the smack he had spat
    He leads me to the couch for me to relax on my back
    And he slides between my legs to give me just that
    I moaned and mmmmed at the sight of him
    Begged for him to enter me and no longer wait
    his touch, kiss, and caress were the best
    he loved me slow
    he loved me fast
    he loved me until we both passed …out
    his actions were definetly better than words
    his lovemaking made my mind surge
    he was all that and more
    he showers and walks out the door
    and now im sure he’s the type that like to hit it, quit it and nothing more



    just like they told me.


    :eek:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    daaaaaammmmmnnnn... I feel you on this one SOOO MUCH!!!!!!! tyte *** flow poet!!!!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well i be ....................sweet love making crazy mad passion
    now he's heading out da door after having u on ya back even
    down to da floor see u seeked much more
    one of those kind
    da hit n' run
    u mastered this piece of feelings flow
     
  4. justbnme03

    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thxs SwtT and $$RICH$$ i havent posted in awhile, thxs for the response
     
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    This was capitivating...I suppose he was "the type". Nice flow.
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so tyte!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ****.......
     
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    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thxs angelicsage and lovelygoldeone, i was seriously lost for a min., i couldnt think of n e thing to write about, im glad to b back
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yooooooooo........
    that was hype!
    baby girl broke it on down, broke it on down!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thxs PlayWitItPimp05 glad u thought it was hype:)
     
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